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How to Develop Story Tension: 13 Techniques plus the Five Minute Magic Trick Guaranteed to Keep Your Readers Turning Pages

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Discover How to Develop Story Tension: 13 Techniques plus the Five Minute Magic Trick Guaranteed to Keep Your Readers Turning Pages by Amy Deardon. Start reading today and explore ideas, insights, and experiences that stay with you.

Overview: See Amy's just-released Book 2 in the Great Ways to Write Your Novel POINT OF VIEW (POV) Fiction's Powerful Emotional Bonding Story writing is challenging. Although the images in your head are vivid, you need to convey them with intensity for your reader to become involved in your story. Translating these images requires story movement that you may not be clearly communicating because you already know what's going on in your story world. You may not see that the reader perceives a story without tension. If you haven't first communicated your story’s direction, stasis can occur even when you’re writing action. As a story coach, I find lack of story tension one of the most common problems, and arguably the deadliest since at every moment your reader is tempted to put down your story. I first discovered how challenging it was to write with tension while composing my own first novel. Although I felt I was doing everything right, the story was dragging. I put it away for a year. When I took it out again I experimented to add a story direction and adapted an invisible method that worked phenomenally--the light bulb went on. Many people told me when reading my novel that they kept wanting to go to bed, but decide to read "just one more chapter" until they found it was three in the morning. Yea! I've continued to refine this technique with my students, and have boiled it down to a five minute exercise that will amaze you. It always works. This technique both directs outer action and brings the reader emotionally close to your characters. I'd love to coach you through this book. I've explained my method in detail, and included examples so you can easily learn this system and use it to ramp up tension in your own writing. You can succeed with your storytelling! By reading this book you will ... It's easier than you think! You can continue to be frustrated writing your novel by trial and error, hoping you've included enough story tension without meandering... or learn the powerful proven techniques that propagate tension for an awesome story. AMY DEARDON is a writer, editor, and publisher as well as story coach. You can visit her on her websites at www.amydeardon.com and www.taegais.com

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Writing Writing Books Nonfiction Non Fiction Reference Writing Craft Bought But Yet To Read
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Published June 13, 2014
ISBN-13 22742780
Amy Deardon
About the Author Amy Deardon
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After spending years working in the corporate world, Amy Deardon finally decided to pursue a lifelong passion for writing. They currently reside in a quiet suburb where they spend most of their time outlining new stories, reading extensively, and occasionally attempting to bake.

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I liked it for the most part. I liked the main character, though some of the side plots were just okay. A solid 4 stars from me.
Jennifer Gonzalez
Jennifer Gonzalez November 08, 2025
Really enjoyed this one. It has a good balance of dialogue and description. Everything felt like it moved at the right speed. Glad I picked this up.
Laura Diaz
Laura Diaz April 11, 2025
Glad someone recommended this to me. The author did a great job wrapping everything up at the end. No weird plot holes left behind. A solid 5/5 for me.
Cynthia Martinez
Cynthia Martinez February 17, 2025
I was pleasantly surprised. The writing style is very engaging. It’s easy to follow but still has a lot of depth. Worth the time and money.
Sandra Walker
Sandra Walker December 30, 2025
I liked it for the most part. I liked the main character, though some of the side plots were just okay. I'd probably recommend it to a friend.
Donna White
Donna White January 14, 2025
Glad someone recommended this to me. The writing style is very engaging. It’s easy to follow but still has a lot of depth. Will be looking for more from this author.
Laura Thompson
Laura Thompson July 28, 2025
Took me a few chapters to get into it, but it was worth it. Interesting premise and executed fairly well. Just a few slow chapters here and there. I'd probably recommend it to a friend.
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